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Before:  The Late Sir J. P. Getty bequeathed the sum of £9,708,692.70 to you in the codicil and last testament to his (WILL) which is eleven (11%) of his total funds of 88,260,443.00 deposited with one of UK's biggest financial institution. I look forward to hearing from you soon. After: The late Sir J. P. Getty bequeathed the sum of £9,708,692.70 to you in a codicil to his last will and